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A Naughty Christmas Carol” How I turned Scrooge into a Sexy Alpha Male #ChristmasEve

I’ve always loved the Dickens’ classic about Scrooge and his scratchy quill pen.

But what if Scrooge worked on Wall Street and used a smart phone instead?

Sounds good, I thought, and set my fingers to tapping on my keyboard. I knew the story by heart, even the dialogue with Scrooge complaining about giving his clerk the day off on Christmas and sending the poor to workhouses.

But we live in a techie world with faxes, GPS, and Twitter. I had to update the story. And don’t forget, I wanted my Scrooge to be a sexy hunk. So I let my imagination run wild.

Here, let me show you:

Imagine you’re rushing around doing last minute Christmas shopping and you run smack into the most gorgeous man you’ve ever seen. He looks you over like he wants to strip off your clothes and bend you over his knee and spank you. Tall, broad shoulders, muscular chest filling out a well-cut $5,000 suit. Silky pin-striped tie, platinum cuff links. His deep blue eyes casting bold glances your way that your mama would never approve of. But you do.

Oh, my.

“Do you work around here?” you ask casually, loving the way he smells when he leans over to see if you’re okay. You nearly faint when you get a whiff of his aristocratic masculine scent. Sweet tobacco, musk. Cinnamon? Who cares? He smells divine.

“I work on Wall street,” he says, smiling.

A banker, nice.

It’s hard to get a taxi this time of day, he says, so he’ll send you home in his limo.

You can’t believe your luck. Is he one of those sexy billionaires you’ve been reading about?

You bet. You’re hooked. A Christmas present in your silk stocking and it’s only Christmas Eve.

He gives you his business card and invites you to have holiday brunch with him in his penthouse.

You’re beside yourself with glee as you rub your thighs together, lovely contractions making you hum a jingly tune.

Then you read his card:
Ebenezer Scrooge.

No, no, no

I hit the Delete button.

It ain’t gonna work.

No matter how handsome, how sexy, how rich, who’s going to fall in love with a guy named Ebenezer? Dickens’ curmudgeon with his ill-fitting suit and stovepipe hat isn’t exactly cover model material. No way would you want him swinging his cane over your butt.

Therein lies the rub: How was I going to make my Scrooge sexy?

And stay true to the Dickens’ classic?

A timeless story of the hero seeing the error of his ways.

That’s what we love about the story, watching him change. I wanted to take that idea a step further and write about an alpha male gone wrong who finds his way home through the love of a beautiful woman.

First, Scrooge needed a new name.

Nick Radnor.

“Nick had a cast iron stomach and tight abs. He was tall, handsome and could wheel and deal with the best of them. Talk on his cell to his bankers with one hand and find his way under the elastic band on his secretary’s black silk panties with the other.”

I had to make the other characters sexy as well. What if his faithful clerk, Mr. Cratchit, was a gorgeous blonde secretary named Jinger?

“Standing in the doorway, the six-foot tall blonde wore red high heels, a black garter belt and black stockings with a red-and-white striped candy cane strapped to her thigh. She wore nothing else but a leather collar around her neck studded with rhinestones and jingle bells.”

I decided my modern Scrooge would also have a beautiful fiancée named Monique:ANaughtyChristmasCarol500_333

“Monique Ashford had the face of an angel and the figure of a model. Came from an old Newport family…Her pink babydoll top barely concealed her full breasts and her tight white panties pinched the crack of her ass…”

Nick frequents Mamie’s, a gentleman’s club in the financial district. Since I write erotic romance, I made it a BDSM club:

“She [Mamie] first strapped on her plastic stilettos and diamond choker back in the Reagan years when she opened up shop in the Silk Stocking district in a swank six-room apartment once owned by a famous madam during the Depression. Business was good and her “private parties” soon began to draw customers from Wall Street…She schooled her girls in the art of the tease as well as how to walk, talk and bend over with grace.”

Marley the Ghost became Nick’s business partner, Charlie Harris, who died in the arms of a beautiful woman at Mamie’s.

A jovial but debauched son of a gun who played the game hard and liked his women rough.”

And we can’t forget the Ghosts of Christmas Past, Present, and Future: three sexy female spirits with great bods and killer wardrobes. Not to mention magical powers.

Once I had my cast of characters (yes, I have a Tiny Tim character, too), now what?

I wanted to stay true to the Dickens’ classic, so I opened the story on Christmas Eve in Nick’s office. It’s late and Nick is working overtime when Jinger reminds him it’s time for holiday sex. No romance, just sex. And no promotion for Jinger either, Nick says. Not this year.

Nick sounds like a heartless one-percenter, doesn’t he? Just like Scrooge. I had to find out why Nick is so cold-hearted. It goes back to Christmas Eve when he was a kid and his corporate raider father gave him coal in his stocking every year. That’s why Nick hates Christmas.

Now we’re getting somewhere. We also meet Nick as a young man and discover that he wasn’t always a greedy businessman.

He’s cold and heartless now and he’s about to find out where that path is taking him when he convinces Mamie to open up her club for him late on Christmas Eve.

The old gal adores Nick, and not just his generous tips. Mamie sees something in him that no one else does: he’s a lost little boy. She also knows that Nick is still grieving over the sudden death of his business partner last Christmas Eve, Charlie.

When Charlie’s ghost shows up after a night of wild drinking and whipping, we’re off and running. The three ghosts make their appearance just like in the classic story. Three sexy babes who take Nick on a whirlwind tour of his past, present, and future with each episode tied to his beautiful fiancée, Monique.

Monique is the anchor in my story. She never stops believing in her man, no matter what. It is through her eyes that we fall in love with Nick, all the while hoping that he wakes up before it’s too late and he loses everything.

Including her.

“A Naughty Christmas Carol” was a blast for me to write. And yes, it has a happy ending. It’s an erotic and sexy 50 Shades of Grey Scrooge with three sexy female ghosts trying to save the soul of a Wall Street trader on this naughty Christmas Eve.

Merry Christmas, everyone!

~Jina

Check out my Naughty Christmas Carol  naughty excerpt on my website


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A Naughty Christmas Carol: What if Scrooge was a New York hottie who had it all?

Except love.

Nick Radnor is a Wall Street trader with no heart Money is his mistress.

Three sexy female ghosts try to save Nick’s soul and reunite him with his first love Monique on this naughty Christmas Eve.

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~Jina

Black Friday FREE: A Naughty Christmas Carol: What if Scrooge was a New York hottie?

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ANaughtyChristmasCarol_AReAs I set out on this Black Friday adventure to the mall, I was wondering what my sexy Scrooge hero, Nick Radnor, is doing today.

Certainly Mr. One-Percenter is not standing in line at Walmart or Best Buy.

No, no. Not this hunky Wall Street stock trader who thinks nothing of dropping $5,000 for a suit or a measly $3,000 for a bottle of champagne.

I imagine Nick is at MAMIE’S, his Gentlemen’s Club, checking out the girls for his, um, favorite past time…BDSM.

Wouldn’t it be fun if the girls at Mamie’s ran Black Friday Sales? I think so. So here you go. MAMIE’S Black Friday Deals just for you Nick Radnors out there looking for personalized Holiday BDSM treats:

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Two pairs of girls wearing Christmas stockings and nothing else for the price of one.

Half off on caning.

Private “Strip-Mas” show at Midnight for early shoppers only.

Christmas suckers wearing cherry-flavored lipstick at 75 percent off.

And here is my favorite:

Christmas comes but once a year, but at Mamie’s, we guarantee you’ll come more than once, then come again!

Happy Holidays and have a Cruel Yule!!

~Jina

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My Sexy Saturday: A Naughty Christmas Carol Part 2

A Naughty Christmas CarolMY SEXY SATURDAY: Check out the sexy snippets from fabulous authors HERE!! 7 words, 7 sentences or 7 paragraphs.

Last Saturday, I introduced you to my modern day Scrooge, Nick Radnor, who works on Wall Street and uses a smartphone instead of a quill pen.

In A NAUGHTY CHRISTMAS CAROL, our modern day Scrooge also has a beautiful fiancée named Monique, who “…professed to have a deep love for him. A love that ignored his questionable business practices.

A flaw in his character, she said, she was determined to fix. No matter how long it took.”

You gotta admire a girl like that. Let’s hope Nick wakes up before it’s too late. In this sexy snippet, we’re in the “now” and the Ghost of Christmas Present has taken Nick to a NYC penthouse holiday party. Nick sees Monique and gets turned-on.

Only one problem: Nick hasn’t been able to get a hard-on since the Ghost of Christmas Past showed up. Seems he’s paying for his sins…

The Ghost of Christmas Present tells him he has to earn his erection by mending his ways. She gives him a chance in this scene. Btw, all the ghosts are sexy females. And Monique can’t see him…

She looked like his dream girl. Standing on the balcony. Looking out over the city. A woman he yearned to love and explore, completely his when they made love, even more beautiful than when they’d first met. A misty snow fell behind her, covering the sidewalks fifteen stories below. Light and pretty and cold. It drifted around Monique, but she didn’t notice. Warm heating lamps and a canopy overhead kept the balcony temperature perfect. She licked the chocolate with her tongue, savoring the taste. Was she remembering those sweet times with him?

Nick couldn’t resist cozying up to her and getting a whiff of her perfume. Spicy, like he remembered. He couldn’t get enough of her. Her bare back seducing him with the promise of sliding off her silky blue gown and revealing her breasts to him. She couldn’t be wearing a bra and the thought of it was pushing him to the edge.

Get closer to her, Nicky. Pull the pins from her hair. It’ll work. You’re here in the present. The Ghost. Giving him play by plays. Okay, he was game. What did he have to lose?

Nick reached out and to his surprise, he felt the cold touch of platinum as he pulled the jeweled pins from her hair and it tumbled down her back like rippling starlight. She drew in a sharp breath, surprised.

She thinks it’s the wind, Nicky. Why don’t you give her a playful slap on her ass?

As if he needed to be told. And by a ghost yet. He stroked Monique’s bottom with his hand, lovingly cupping her buttocks, then gave her a playful tap. Then another. That was fun.

“Oh!” Monique cried out, spinning around, her breasts heaving up and down, her eyes disbelieving. She looked behind her, then left then right. She couldn’t see him. Better yet, he noticed a slight bulge in his pants. Merry Christmas. You’re on your own now, Nicky boy.

And check out the Naughty Christmas Carol VINE snippet:

You can read a longer excerpt of A Naughty Christmas Carol HERE!

Three sexy female ghosts try to save the soul of a Wall Street trader on this naughty Christmas Eve.

I hope you’ve enjoyed my Christmas in July “A NAUGHTY CHRISTMAS CAROLsexy snippets!

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